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--- worms_ferry [2020/08/11 18:51] – andrew
+++ worms_ferry [2020/08/12 16:18] – tweaks, grammar andrew
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 The "cursed ferry" as it is called is pushed by one brave boy just after sunrise, and then back again an hour before the sun falls once again. The Earl's Men commanded by [[angus|Angus McNasty, Reeve of Worm's Ferry]] on the West shore help collect the tolls and dole out justice if any shenanigans should transpire.
-The population of the settlement itself is currently:
+Angus McNasty led a group of the Earl's men to liberate the village from bandits. They recaptured the manor house on January 9, 1130 and rechristened the manor house [[STATELY ANGUS MANOR|Stately Angus Manor]] in honor of Angus, the village's new reeve.
+The population of the settlement itself is currently:
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   * Cooper and his son Cooperson
   * Porkins and his two nephews
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   * Worm the ancient ferryman, his second wife Mary (nee Non-Gorilla) and their eight youngish children - at least three of which bear an uncanny resemblance to Handsome Steve
     * Little Timmy - Worm's oldest child by his first wife - was killed in the fight against "Brother Riley" and his blasphemous monks in January of 1130
-  * Five farm homes that tend the fields and livestock within a half mile radius are located in various directions a few hundred yards from the square of the settlement the farmers' names are:
+  * Five farm homes that tend the fields and livestock within a half mile radius are located in various directions a few hundred yards from the square of the settlement. The farmers' family names are:
-    * Alistair - To the south, along the Godwin River with some Irish blood and a short temper
+    * Alistair - To the Southeast, right along the Godwin River with some Irish blood and short temper
-    * Beverly - North by the beaver dams in the stream, these farmers have a quality harvest and often offer their surplus as trade
+    * Beverly - Northwest by the beaver dams in the stream, these farmers have a quality harvest and often offer their surplus as trade
     * Jeffery - A godly family directly West, once close with "Brother Riley" but most recently forsaking the abbey
-    * Robin - This smaller family of herding farmers are all accomplished hunters - the youngest boy Robinson is the best of the bunch
+    * Robin - This smaller family of herding farmers to the Southwest are all accomplished hunters - the youngest boy Robinson is the best of the bunch
-    * Wolfgang - This family has built a serviceable oven to get into the baking business but they are just terrible at it
+    * Wolfgang - This family to the South has built a serviceable oven to get into the baking business but they are just terrible at it
   * A small mill along the creek to the North is run by the greedy Miller and his family of marriage-age daughters
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