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--- timeline [2021/07/13 18:04] – [The Modern Age] andrew
+++ timeline [2021/10/29 12:33] (current) – [Age of Empire] andrew
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 ===== Age of the Dead Daeva =====
-In the before times, the [[daeva#the_dead_daeva|Dead Daeva]] were overthrown by the [[daeva#the_old_daeva|Old Daeva]] who took Kyor for their own.
+In the before times, the [[daeva#the_dead_daeva|Dead Daeva]] were overthrown by the [[daeva#the_old_daeva|Old Daeva]] who took Kyor for their own. This time is often described poetically as "when the old gods were new."
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 ===== Age of Empire =====
-During this age, the Elven Conclave of [[Albion]] ruled supreme across the waves of Kyor. Their swift twin-hulled ships and massive battle-barges conquered the world and consumed the resources wherever it could. The elven caste system is codified during this period.
+During this age, the Elven Conclave of [[Albion]] ruled supreme across the waves of Kyor. Their swift twin-hulled ships and massive battle-barges conquered the world and consumed all the resources it could. The elven caste system is codified during this period.
 ===== Age of Young Kingdoms =====
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 All the lands of Kyor have a different feel. Some like [[Radavan]] are empty frontiers with points of civilization punctuating forgotten ruins and dark dungeons. Others like [[Albion]] are over-populated hives of hedonistic excess left as a people slowly rots on its own decadence. There are young, hungry barbarian kingdoms and proud city-states with their own ancient codes of honor.
+The years of the Modern Age are counted from the events of the [[Sundered Conclave]] which broke the total domination of the [[albion|Elven Empire]].
 Notable events of the Modern Age include: